tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.comments2010-10-20T10:11:20.940-04:00Tangled FictionTangled Fictionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14597588459795626668noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-26704102307627945732010-10-20T10:11:20.940-04:002010-10-20T10:11:20.940-04:00Thanks, Jess! :D So glad you liked it!Thanks, Jess! :D So glad you liked it!Lacey J Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17930985573303127061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-15693083040240014322010-10-20T09:57:57.719-04:002010-10-20T09:57:57.719-04:00While I enjoyed the conclusion and the events lead...While I enjoyed the conclusion and the events leading up to it, I found the voice to be slightly off. Of course when switching from one writer to another that's bound to happen.<br /><br />Basically, I found it to be too modern sounding, especially with the statement:<br /><i>"What she really meant was they needed to get the hell out of the kitchen."</i><br /><br />Otherwise, it was great!Jess (The Cozy Reader)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09952470536106390326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-3465710615780075322010-10-20T09:45:32.753-04:002010-10-20T09:45:32.753-04:00Awesome work Lacey! :) Loved this addition.Awesome work Lacey! :) Loved this addition.Jess (The Cozy Reader)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09952470536106390326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-27298407590157342102010-10-12T23:32:57.298-04:002010-10-12T23:32:57.298-04:00whoo hoo! (That's the sound I made when I foun...whoo hoo! (That's the sound I made when I found the "Post a Comment" button.)<br /><br />Cannot wait to see where this puppy goes. :D :DAnne Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08013092491987470465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-38920222960389725152010-10-12T20:00:57.849-04:002010-10-12T20:00:57.849-04:00Ack! Sooo creepy Anne!Ack! Sooo creepy Anne!Valerie Kemphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05795714434618357955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-341202098608076552010-10-12T10:34:41.338-04:002010-10-12T10:34:41.338-04:00Very chilling, Anne!Very chilling, Anne!Lacey J Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17930985573303127061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-60640382808692204552010-10-05T11:06:04.339-04:002010-10-05T11:06:04.339-04:00Thanks Lacey! I can't wait to see what happens...Thanks Lacey! I can't wait to see what happens next!Valerie Kemphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05795714434618357955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-38513291350720666432010-10-05T10:21:08.181-04:002010-10-05T10:21:08.181-04:00Ooh! Great imagery! This is going to be fun!Ooh! Great imagery! This is going to be fun!Lacey J Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17930985573303127061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-80924687470624521912010-09-29T00:11:12.331-04:002010-09-29T00:11:12.331-04:00Thanks for fixing my terrible block-y error. One d...Thanks for fixing my terrible block-y error. One day, Blogger and I are going to be friends. :DAnne Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08013092491987470465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-36566302898619651872010-09-28T10:00:37.420-04:002010-09-28T10:00:37.420-04:00Loved it, Anne! Great conclusion!Loved it, Anne! Great conclusion!Lacey J Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17930985573303127061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-20200136170341143922010-09-20T12:22:38.491-04:002010-09-20T12:22:38.491-04:00Thanks Jess! I can't wait to see Lacey's e...Thanks Jess! I can't wait to see Lacey's either!Valerie Kemphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05795714434618357955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-48754592129601135042010-09-18T14:05:27.686-04:002010-09-18T14:05:27.686-04:00Thanks, Jess! I'm actually really nervous to p...Thanks, Jess! I'm actually really nervous to post after these two.Lacey J Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17930985573303127061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-28827167575680930732010-09-18T10:54:09.711-04:002010-09-18T10:54:09.711-04:00Great addition. :) I'm looking forward to Lace...Great addition. :) I'm looking forward to Lacey's take!Jess (The Cozy Reader)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09952470536106390326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-80263762168193232802010-09-07T17:47:40.574-04:002010-09-07T17:47:40.574-04:00@Sara Mclung <3
I was seriously craving straw...<b>@Sara Mclung <3 </b><br /><br />I was seriously craving strawberry tarts when I wrote this. ;)<br /><br />Glad I could entice and revolt you!<br /><br /><b>@Angela Ackerman</b><br /><br />Thank you!Natalie C Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07590029947267775660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-63142050607354992012010-09-07T16:31:54.934-04:002010-09-07T16:31:54.934-04:00Decidedly creepy. Love your sensory description. N...Decidedly creepy. Love your sensory description. Nice work!<br /><br /><br />Angela @ The Bookshelf MuseAngela Ackermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01808259088625142389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-63103198051455235112010-09-07T15:25:01.785-04:002010-09-07T15:25:01.785-04:00Love it!!!
"staggered in rows of twelve eac...Love it!!! <br /><br />"staggered in rows of twelve each with bits of strawberry preserve gleaming just beneath the flaky pastry"<br /><br />CUE hunger pains and saliva.<br /><br />And then, it's totally erased:<br /><br />"The first breath was the worst. She could taste it in the back of her throat, rot and decay"<br /><br />:) Can't wait to read the next part!!Sara {Rhapsody and Chaos}https://www.blogger.com/profile/09824996048264979275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-61409006822243571882010-09-07T14:57:28.267-04:002010-09-07T14:57:28.267-04:00@ Kristi Helvig
Thanks, Kristi! I hope this stor...<b>@ Kristi Helvig</b><br /><br />Thanks, Kristi! I hope this story makes MOST children look like angels. ;)Natalie C Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07590029947267775660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-56942089661242466232010-09-07T14:10:35.430-04:002010-09-07T14:10:35.430-04:00I love creepy--plus, this story makes my kids look...I love creepy--plus, this story makes my kids look like angels. Great job, Natalie! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05255908019822363456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-30584617518396577002010-09-07T13:20:24.876-04:002010-09-07T13:20:24.876-04:00@Jess (The Cozy Reader)
Thank you! I can't wa...<b>@Jess (The Cozy Reader)</b><br /><br />Thank you! I can't wait to see what she does with it either.Natalie C Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07590029947267775660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-43142841977885788662010-09-07T12:16:14.765-04:002010-09-07T12:16:14.765-04:00Very erie but I can't wait to see where Valeri...Very erie but I can't wait to see where Valerie takes it! :) Great job Natalie!`Jess (The Cozy Reader)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09952470536106390326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-78749477642522269072010-09-07T08:47:00.463-04:002010-09-07T08:47:00.463-04:00@Simon Hay Soul Healer
Thank you! Glad you liked...<b>@Simon Hay Soul Healer</b><br /><br />Thank you! Glad you liked the rules. :)Natalie C Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07590029947267775660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7133227720510411391.post-61296061360269809012010-09-07T08:21:41.898-04:002010-09-07T08:21:41.898-04:00Boy I can taste that! The smell of dead things is ...Boy I can taste that! The smell of dead things is something I'm familiar with. It lines the back of the throat like no other scent. These lines were my favourites: There weren’t many of them and they only needed to be followed on Tuesdays: bake strawberry tarts, light a hickory wood fire in the southwest chamber no later than 4 o’clock, don’t play with dead things.<br /><br />Very cool.Simon Hayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09384384882217609761noreply@blogger.com